I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi my name is joseph and I am from Paihia School. I really like you telling me facts about Camels. At my old school I went to a zoo at Auckland and I got to see a Camel. Have you ever seen a Camel in a zoo before?
Hola Bree, my name is Jamie and I am a year eight student at Paihia School. I really liked your post about camels it was a very interesting post. I like the facts you added they were really interesting, I like the picture of the camel you put on there it made it more of an enjoyable post to read. Have you ever seen a camel before? And did you get to choose what animal you picked, if so why did you pick a camel? Keep up the great work.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi my name is joseph and I am from Paihia School. I really like you telling me facts about Camels. At my old school I went to a zoo at Auckland and I got to see a Camel.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever seen a Camel in a zoo before?
Hola Bree, my name is Jamie and I am a year eight student at Paihia School. I really liked your post about camels it was a very interesting post. I like the facts you added they were really interesting, I like the picture of the camel you put on there it made it more of an enjoyable post to read. Have you ever seen a camel before? And did you get to choose what animal you picked, if so why did you pick a camel? Keep up the great work.
ReplyDelete