I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Bree, its Mahana from Paihia School I liked your blog about weird but true facts about animals because you added more than three facts and you made your title look nice. I liked that you added a poster on your blog post. What was the strangest fact out of them all?
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Hi Bree, its Mahana from Paihia School I liked your blog about weird but true facts about animals because you added more than three facts and you made your title look nice. I liked that you added a poster on your blog post. What was the strangest fact out of them all?
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