I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hello Bree, my name is Jamie and I am a year eight student at Paihia School. I think it is a very kind message that you are trying to deliver to people it seems very kind and thoughtful. I like how you used a little emoji at the end it makes your post much more exciting. Do you know any other ways to be kind to other people? Great post keep up the awesome work.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Bree, my name is Jamie and I am a year eight student at Paihia School. I think it is a very kind message that you are trying to deliver to people it seems very kind and thoughtful. I like how you used a little emoji at the end it makes your post much more exciting. Do you know any other ways to be kind to other people? Great post keep up the awesome work.
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