I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Bree my name is Mahana and I’m a year six at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about backgrounds for the class site because it looked really nice and you added details to it. It reminds me about when I was painting my house and looking at different backgrounds for my house. When I was choosing a background I chose a nice creamy color because I think It looked pretty and It was a nice color. What is your favourite colour?
Hi Bree my name is Mahana and I’m a year six at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about backgrounds for the class site because it looked really nice and you added details to it. It reminds me about when I was painting my house and looking at different backgrounds for my house. When I was choosing a background I chose a nice creamy color because I think It looked pretty and It was a nice color. What is your favourite colour?
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Hi Bree my name is Mahana and I’m a year six at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about backgrounds for the class site because it looked really nice and you added details to it. It reminds me about when I was painting my house and looking at different backgrounds for my house. When I was choosing a background I chose a nice creamy color because I think It looked pretty and It was a nice color. What is your favourite colour?
ReplyDeleteHi Bree my name is Mahana and I’m a year six at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about backgrounds for the class site because it looked really nice and you added details to it. It reminds me about when I was painting my house and looking at different backgrounds for my house. When I was choosing a background I chose a nice creamy color because I think It looked pretty and It was a nice color. What is your favourite colour?
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