I am poem
I am: a horse
I wonder if: I can be the fastest horse
I hear: neighing from my friends
I see: a sunset in front of me
I am: a horse
I pretend: that I'm the fastest horse
I feel: confident
I touch: grass with the top of my hoof
I worry: that my friends will leave me
I cry: when I am damaged
I am: a sencedev horse
I understand: I will not be the fastest horse
I say: I will not always be right
I dream: that I could be the fastest horse
I try: to be part of the bigs herd in the world
I hope: that I get ridden more
I am: a horse that needs more love
Bree
Hi Bree my name is Steven
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how many sisters and brothers do you have
I have 3 sisters and no brothers
ReplyDeleteDo you have any animals?
ReplyDeletei have 4 hores 1 dog 1 frog 2 cicks
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ReplyDeletehi bree i love your poem and i am a horse lover and i love your horse
ReplyDeleteHi Bree my name is Aneika i am a horse lover too. I love your pome. i like the bit about horses needing more love. I have at a horse at home do you?. By the way I go to kaingaroa school
ReplyDeletehi i`m Luka i like your poem we were doing poems in our class. Do you like horses?
ReplyDeletehi Bree im Nela i love your horse poem because of the desripshion i have 4 horse how bout you???
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